我的高考作文!!!----<富人被盗>

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 宋国有个富人,一天大雨把他家的墙淋坏了。他儿子说:“不修好,一定会有人来偷窃。”邻居家的一位老人也这样说。晚上富人家里果然丢失了很多东西。富人觉得他儿子很聪明,而怀疑是邻居家老人偷的。
  以上是《韩非子》中的一个寓言。直到今天,我们仍然可以在现实生活中听到类似的故事,但是,也常见到许多不同的甚至相反的情况。我们在认识事物和处理问题的时候,感情上的亲疏远近和对事物认知的正误深浅有没有关系呢?是什么样的关系呢?请就“感情亲疏和对事物的认知”这个话题写一篇文章。


(以上系2003年全国高考作文题目)

感情的亲疏和对事物的认知


亲爱的老师,如果是您在给我们这些参加高考的学生评分,那么我想请问您是男的还是女的呢?如果是女的,我会告诉你我是个男孩,在我们学校,女老师都特别喜欢男学生一些,我同组的赛潘安同学就经常受到我们英语老师的照顾,我们英语老师今年三十二岁,可长得贼漂亮,人家都说她用玉兰油防晒,还用V26保持身材,用太太口服夜静心,用脑白金健脑,反正她是我们学校最漂亮的女老师之一,连严肃的老校长都对她很亲热,她在我们班上单单就喜欢这个赛潘安同学,赛潘安个子高,皮肤黝黑象乔丹,还是校篮球队的中锋,肌肉鼓起来的时候就象斯瓦辛格(就是演电影&lt;生死时速&gt;的那个),连身下的阳物(生物老师说,凸起的东西就叫阳物)都24小时凸起,所以尽管那个男生的英语水平全班倒数第一,说THANYS都说不圆满,但是我们英语老师就是喜欢他,我们同学都说他们感情亲密,所以影响了英语老师对那个男同学的判断,即使英文水平最次,也还是喜欢得紧,夸他聪明,正直,热情.

我不知道感情的亲疏是不是真的就一定影响对事物的认知,反正我也见得多了,男老师比较喜欢女学生,女老师比较喜欢男学生,引用物理老师的说法就是同性相斥,异性相吸,真神奇,他还用两块磁铁现场做了实验,令我们全班同学大为叹服.所以,我今天就赌您是一个女老师,我是个男学生,在全班同学中,我的长相仅次于赛潘安,我的个人电子相册网址是:phtomy.com,你可以立即上网验证,看我是不是一个诚实的孩子.如果您比较喜欢我的照片,请您评分的时候多评一点,好吗?

说老实话,我最害怕写作文,就拿今天这个作文题目来说吧,说的这个故事我压根儿就没有听说过,可是不写就不得分,所以就得硬着头皮写,小时侯学的那些董存瑞的故事多惊险,怎么不就拿来出题呢?我爷爷说,当年他们高考就好象出了董存瑞的题,还硬拉着我看了很大一会怀旧电影,黑白故事片还真好看,在我家里,我爷爷是最疼我的了,可是他对高考作文的认知真让我恨透了他,按我说,感情亲密不一定能够认识到事物的真相,倒是那天有一个算命的,我跟他素不相识,他收了我10快钱,告诉我,今年高考作文要谈感情,你等着瞧,以前他说他是半仙我不信,可是现在我信了,真的,你看,这作文题不就在谈感情么?

我想考北大,万一不行清华也可以的,听说北京的学生们都用自己城市的题目在考试了,上海的交大也不错,可是人家上海也是用自己的另一套题目再考,总感觉北大就是北京人的,上海交大就是上海人的,要不怎么不愿意跟全国人民一个战线,非要自己另起炉灶呢?感情的亲疏又体现出来了,北大在北京,自然跟北京人亲近,交大在上海,自然跟上海人亲近,于是用不同的题目来认知考生的水准,看来这个亲疏论可不是闹着玩的,亲就是亲,疏就是疏.

以上的作文题目虽然看不懂,可是为了上北大,在不济也上过医学院吧,我还是就这个寓言故事说一下自己的看法:

一,故事背景交代不清楚

文章只说宋国有一个富人,可是这个富人叫什么名字都不透露,让我们去猜测,实在是大大的不妙,你看现今的世界“福布斯”不仅有全世界的富豪榜,连中国的富豪榜都出来了,最近有文章说胡润弄的那个富豪榜就是富豪们的通缉令,周正毅是上海首富,被抓了.仰融也曾是中国前几位的富豪,被抓了,杨斌的荷兰村涉嫌作假,也是被抓了,做富人不好做,做穷人也不好做,穷人连三餐都要发愁,富人就整天要作假,我觉得宋国那个富人肯定也好不到哪里去.

可是尽管如此,尽管富人有可能被抓,但总不能因噎废食吧,在这个文章中连名字都不告诉我们,我们如何去思考,比如这个宋国富人的发家史,创业史,奋斗史,慈善史,都是我们关注的,一个文章要精彩,就必须要这些作料,这个寓言不好,首先就是这些基本的元素交代不清楚,再说了,那都是远在宋国时候的事,报出姓名来根本也没有什么,难不成还有人去挖他家祖坟盗墓?

二,儿子很聪明,但是父亲为什么那么笨?

人是环境的产物,一个聪明的环境自然会产生出聪明的人,中国古话都说,龙生龙,凤生凤,老鼠的儿子会打洞,这个富人的儿子如此聪明,打小就知道墙垮了会遭小偷的硬道理,可是这个富人却不知道,这个在遗传学上说不通,还有就是富人家财万贯,要是脑袋进水,大概也不会创造这么大的家业,可是这个富人在故事里的表现就真跟进水一个样,儿子也提醒了,连邻居家老头子也提醒了,还不知道派人值守防盗,这就真让人唏嘘了.

三,丢了些什么,为什么不去报案???

有一个公安局长,家里被盗十万现金,妻子请其报案,并说凭着在公安局的地位,就是翻遍整个城市也要把那盗贼找出来,可是这个局长却做痛苦状,谓“使不得,使不得”;

局长的十万是从哪里来的?深谙法制的局长自然知道巨额财产来源不明会有什么下场,因此做不了了了状.还有更多的人,小偷光顾了家里,还强颜欢笑,不报案不侦察,仿佛那钱是别人的,文章中的宋国富人即使怀疑隔壁老头偷了自家的东西,似乎也没有丝毫要报官的意思,有两种原因可供解释.

第一是那个老头知道富人这钱也是横财,所以就放心大胆的偷着花着.
第二就是那个富人也怕背上巨额财产来源不明罪,只好打落牙齿往自己嘴里吞.

四,月黑风高时,富人一家在做什么?

想来,只是一墙倒尔,便注定似的引来了一场盗窃案,只是在被偷盗的当口,富人一家在做什么?这似乎是个悬案,这个悬案可以有很多个版本解释:

1,可能富人正和妻子在家里看黄碟,兴起处,闯进来一帮官府衙役,就把他们五花大绑的去了衙门,连夜开堂审理,最后官府认定他们传播淫秽物品,罚款5000个大洋,而等他们交钱回来后,家中已被盗.呜呼.

2,可能富人的妻子正从娘家赶回来,突然在路上被官府抓去,说是富人妻子卖淫有伤风化,要罚款5000,并被勒令交代嫖客名单,妻子无奈之下,供出多年以来唯一的性伴侣,也就是富人,于是富人连夜也被抓进衙门,交代问题.而等他们交代完问题,家中已被盗,呜呼.

3,富人儿子饭后散步,被人拦住,搜查户口簿,儿子未料到有这一招,仗着是富豪的儿子又是当地人氏,就顶了一句,于是儿子被抓进难民营,官差派人来通报富人,说是要3000两银子才肯放人,富人心急火燎的赶去,待解救得儿子出来,家中已被盗.

五,无言的结局.

这个寓言简短,但是还有一些结局没有交代清楚,作者惜墨如金,连故事所应该具备的结局都没有进行交代就收尾了,让人很不爽,老师都说,写作文就是要有开头,过程和结局的,我想寓言也应该是作文吧,因此,这个没有结局的寓言是不完整的,在这里我大胆的预言一下故事的结局:

富人因怀疑邻居家老头是盗贼,但又苦于没有任何证据,终日郁郁寡欢.忽一日,其子从山间采来一篮冠状蘑菇,被家中猫咪偷食,猫咪不日而死.

富人大赫,乃焚其猫咪,后灵机一动,命其子尽数将冠状蘑菇送与邻居.
第二日,邻居全家死完,御医查其死因,久久不得,最后上报死因时写到:非*典型性死亡,死因不详.

 

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